Some people think it is better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them.Other people believe it's good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them.
discuss both views and give your own opinion
Friends are greater influence in today's era. A section of society believes that people feel more comfortable with their friends who is having same thoughts as them while another school of thought refutes it by arguing that it would be beneficial if people have advantageous views to argue with each other. This essay will discuss both these conflicting views before it reaches to an appropriate conclusion.
On one hand,there are individuals who are of the opinion that it is better to have company of friends who thinks in the same way as them which helps them to develop better understanding with each other.As a result,it would be beneficial in tough times of life as they impart moral support to each other.For instance,In U.S university,people who have identical mindset tend to recover faster from stress or anxiety.Moreover,like-minded personalities also succor people to discuss about well-thought career plan which eventually helps for their career growth.
On the other hand,there are those in the society who believes that contradictory views are significant to guide people in a better way.The foremost reason for this belief is having distinguish views on some topic people can do a healthy discussion.Thus,people can share different ideas and thoughts which would facilitate them to broaden their horizons.To illustrate,Most of the people can sharpen their knowledge and develop abilities to think from other aspects as well.In addition to this,Due to having different mindset,it would become easy to take certain decision on any matter and friend's suggestion are taken into consideration.
To recapitulate,in line with the views presented above it is evident that both these differing views hold on their respective positions and sense of relevance.I,however am of the opinion that having friend with different thought process would be effective as it increases one's cognizance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, for instance, in addition, as a result, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1611.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47959183673 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.43359723696 2.80592935109 122% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561224489796 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 49.0 20.2975951904 241% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 218.425934561 49.4020404114 442% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 268.5 106.682146367 252% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 49.0 20.7667163134 236% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.8333333333 7.06120827912 253% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.427684098031 0.244688304435 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.201417401051 0.084324248473 239% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105536422894 0.0667982634062 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.267336526089 0.151304729494 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0671483584582 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.9 13.0946893788 221% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 13.28 50.2224549098 26% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.6 11.3001002004 209% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.39 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.2 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 21.6 10.1190380762 213% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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