Some people think it is better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them.Other people believe it's good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them.
discuss both views and give your own opinion
Friends are someone who is close to us and is like family who has significant importance in our lives .Many people consider to have friend circle whose thought process is similar to them whereas some believe it is better to have friends whose opinion contradicts to their opinion. Here we would discuss both the views.
Well, when one has similar opiniated people around them it when he is stucked somewhere and seeks clarity of thoughts .As long as he as friend circle with similar functioning of thoughts it might get easy for him to declutter his thoughts when his mind is blocked. For example The friend's opinion can be pretty accurate when given in behalf of that person as they both have same mindset .This can lead to easy decision making and avoid lots of confusion.
Furthermore, when it comes to friends with diverse opinion ,one can get to know about the different perspective of the same problem as thinking ability to tackle problem in each of the friend is unique. It leads to solution with less chances of failing as the problem is thought from all the different perspective and causing least chances of it being not considered or getting failed .
However I am of the opinion that it is far more better to have friends with different opinions and different characteristics than having friends with similar opinions. As one can learn new things every other day the new aspects of life and it also helps them broaden their horizons.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, so, well, whereas, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1206.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80478087649 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47017992537 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561752988048 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.9810549047 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.75 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.375 20.7667163134 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.367988306528 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149966405454 0.084324248473 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1209098052 0.0667982634062 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230922361157 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116461051892 0.056905535591 205% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 9.78957915832 179% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.