Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement.
There subsist numerous outstanding ways to bring people together, out of which one is music. Some people believe that music cultivates a sense of togetherness among different people, who varies in age and culture. This essay shall explore constructive arguments to support the above notion to an extent and discuss the other point of view in the forthcoming paragraphs.
Admittedly, sound hits the brain in a different manner, so is the music. When people listens to the music of other countries and culture, gradually they develop a sense of understanding and consequently they begin to like it. My mother, for instance, is not an expertise in telegu language; however, she admires telegu songs upto an extent that she has started learning that language. Not only it brings unfamiliar cultures together, but also people of various ages. Recently it was seen in my neighborhood that a grandfather was dancing on one of his grandson's favorite english song along with him, which exemplifies my above point.
On the flip side, this world embodies different kinds of human beings, therefore not all are connected to a variety of music. Few people find it annoying to listen to any other music apart from their regional ones, of which they are habitual. A survey conducted last year in the capital, states that six out of ten elderly people listen to the same old music despite being suggested latest songs by youth.
Additionally, some people argues that music creates a hinderance in their work and therefore they do not listen to it.
By and large, my opinion inclines over the statement that suggests music is the ultimate best way to bring people closer; however, non lovers of music if considered, might completely deny from this statement.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a different manner" with adverb for "different"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'suggested the latest'.
Suggestion: suggested the latest
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, so, therefore, apart from, for instance, by and large
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04137931034 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67812737387 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603448275862 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0828274903 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.461538462 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3076923077 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313807647885 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111213394502 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0738445746298 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179131528306 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490147661449 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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