The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given diagram sheds lights on how instant noodles are created/ the manufacturing process of instant noodles/ the procedure of making instant noodles.
As can be seen from the diagram, eight stages are required so as to produce noodles cups, initiating with the filling of flour and culminating with the labelling stage.
The process commences with flour being filled into large storage containers, which is known as silos. At the subsequent stage, it is transferred directly to an industrial mixer with added water and oil in order to obtain a dough mixture. After that, rollers are used with the aim of flattening the dough, these dough sheets then go through stripping machine and being formed into discs in the fourth and fifth stage respectively. The next stage involves the frying and drying of compact noodles discs, following by the seventh steps, in which they will be moved into cups with the addition of vegetable flakes and spices. Ultimately, people will add labels onto the packagings and seal them carefully with the assistance of a sealing machine for completion.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 60, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
... the diagram, eight stages are required so as to produce noodles cups, initiating with t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 909.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10674157303 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57259821642 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668539325843 0.547539520022 122% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.3872959492 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.857142857 112.824112599 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4285714286 22.9334400587 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.71428571429 5.23603664747 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105950623778 0.215688989381 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.05526279462 0.103423049105 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104780737295 0.0843802449381 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123658584837 0.15604864568 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.131370773414 0.0819641961636 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.