It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance, for sports or music and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
A few people opine that talent of being a good sportsperson or musician is inbuilt while others cogitate that children can be trained to play sports or music. In my opinion, skills are both inborn and instilled. I would be explaining both the viewpoints in my essay.
To commence with, some people are indeed born with incomparable talents. In other words, it is not even required, sometimes, to introduce them to their field of expertise, they just find their way through the thick and thin. To illustrate this, there has been well known child prodigies. In music it is Mozart and Bento Asis, who is a golf prodigy. They both excelled in their fields at the age of 4 and 2 respectively with limited guidance from their parents. Hence, their talent and love for their field is nothing but inborn.
On the other hand, it is also believed by few people that skills can be taught to children. To elaborate, children often become interested in the activities by looking up to the elders. In such cases, if parents divert their attention towards sports or music and provide them required training, they are able to learn faster. For instance, Katy Perry did not sing at all until age of nine but when she was given training in music and dance, she never had to look back. Therefore, once the children dedicate their time and effort in learning something it is possible for them to be talented.
In conclusion, I would reiterate that people can be either have a natural inbuilt talent or it can be imbibed. I would also argue that, morning shows the days. A talent inbuilt or imbibed never goes wasted.
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- It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents for instance for sports or music and others are not However it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician Discuss both these views an 61
- It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents for instance for sports or music and others are not However it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician Discuss both these views an 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, so, still, therefore, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1328.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70921985816 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47250358547 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599290780142 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.6587298086 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.1176470588 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5882352941 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23529411765 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273180423662 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0780001160179 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675765857406 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156820102918 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477252587237 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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