The maps describe the renovation of Colwick Arts Centre from 2005 to the present. Some remarkable changes can be easily seen, such as the modernization and the utilization of the wasteland.
It can be seen from the maps that the unused place on the back of the art center is now be used for an outdoor exhibition and performance area with plenty of trees around, when some bench and table are placed for people who come to watch the performance.
The concert hall and cinema now no longer stick together; the concert hall is in the up-right corner, where is used to be 2 galleries, next to it is the cinema and the restroom. Unlike 2 galleries in the past, there is only 1 now, on the left of the center, and the café is right behind it. In the middle, a central exhibition area was built, when the information desk is still in the same place as it was, behind the central exhibition area. The big meeting room was removed, and instead of that, there are 2 small ones now, on the up-left corner of the center. Moreover, a new drama studio is opened, next to the 2 meeting rooms.
To sum up, the Colwick Art Centre has changed into a more professional and attractive place to visit than in 2005.
The maps describe the renovation of Colwick Arts Centre from 2005 to the present. Some remarkable changes can be easily seen, such as the modernization and the utilization of the wasteland.
It can be seen from the maps that the unused place on the back of the art center is now be used for an outdoor exhibition and performance area with plenty of trees around, when some bench and table are placed for people who come to watch the performance.
The concert hall and cinema now no longer stick together; the concert hall is in the up-right corner, where is used to be 2 galleries, next to it is the cinema and the restroom. Unlike 2 galleries in the past, there is only 1 now, on the left of the center, and the café is right behind it. In the middle, a central exhibition area was built, when the information desk is still in the same place as it was, behind the central exhibition area. The big meeting room was removed, and instead of that, there are 2 small ones now, on the up-left corner of the center. Moreover, a new drama studio is opened, next to the 2 meeting rooms.
To sum up, the Colwick Art Centre has changed into a more professional and attractive place to visit than in 2005.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, so, still, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 983.0 1615.20841683 61% => OK
No of words: 222.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42792792793 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45129903828 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558558558559 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 506.74238477 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1708172071 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.222222222 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.403283226548 0.244688304435 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.170433926408 0.084324248473 202% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.206910331028 0.0667982634062 310% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.33533905828 0.151304729494 222% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.315999999766 0.056905535591 555% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.71 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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