“In order to alleviate the serious unemployment problem in our town, we should encourage Autotech to build its automobile manufacturing plant in our area. The Hillview landfill, which has been undeveloped for decades, is a perfect site for this plant. The building and staffing of this plant will put to work thousands of Hillview residents left unemployed after Computech computer software programming company abandoned its national facility last year. I am asking the City Council to authorize a large campaign to attract the company and offer significant tax incentives to make our town attractive to this giant of car manufacturing.”
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the recommendation and the argument on which it is based are reasonable. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the recommendation.
The mayor suggest that inorder to solve the probelem of unemployment, they should encourage an automobile manufacturing company to build a plant in their area which would eventually help the unemployeed to get jobs. For this the mayor asks the City council to authorize a large campaign to attract the comapny and offer significant tax incentives to make their town attractive to the giant car manufacturing. It is indeed a good thought, however there are questions that still need to be addressed.
Firstly, what is the percentage of unemployement in the town? Is the same problem being faced by other towns of the states? If many other towns are feeling the same problem, it is a problem that needs to be addressed by the state as a whole raather than solve it as a problem for an individual town.
Secondly, for building an automobile manufacturing plant, many basic facilities like access to proper transportation system, electricity, residence etc is very important. It is inportant that that town has access to these facilities. Another concern is with the Hillview landfield which is underdeveloped for decades. What is the reason behind the underdevelopment? Also, are the people in the town qualified enough?
Thirdly, the mayor asks the city council to authorize a large campaign to attract the company. Large campaigns requires a great amount of funds. Hence the financial condition is also important. the passage states that Computech abandoned its national facility last year. It is possible that similar incident might happen with Autotech. If this happens, there is no permanent solution to this problem.
One of the suggestions can be the people in the town can start a small scale business by getting incentives from the government. The products like handicrafts,handloom products, food items etc.
Manufactuing plant can ofcourse lead to decrease in unemployement if the above mention concerns are mitigated.Hence, it is important to know about all the above mentioned aspects before autorizing this large campaign.
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Comments
e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 7 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 15 2
No. of Sentences: 19 15
No. of Words: 328 350
No. of Characters: 1669 1500
No. of Different Words: 183 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.256 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.088 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.905 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 114 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 98 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 69 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 48 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.263 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.419 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.474 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.272 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.549 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.038 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'suggests'.
Suggestion: suggests
The mayor suggest that inorder to solve the probelem of u...
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Line 1, column 229, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he unemployeed to get jobs. For this the mayor asks the City council to authorize...
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Line 5, column 326, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...h is underdeveloped for decades. What is the reason behind the underdevelopment? ...
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Line 7, column 146, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...aigns requires a great amount of funds. Hence the financial condition is also importa...
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Line 7, column 195, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
... financial condition is also important. the passage states that Computech abandoned...
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Line 9, column 159, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , handloom
...overnment. The products like handicrafts,handloom products, food items etc. Manufactu...
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Line 9, column 194, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rafts,handloom products, food items etc. Manufactuing plant can ofcourse lead to ...
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Line 11, column 111, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Hence
...he above mention concerns are mitigated.Hence, it is important to know about all the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, third, thirdly
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.6327345309 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.9520958084 54% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 11.1786427146 9% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 13.6137724551 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 28.8173652695 76% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 55.5748502994 70% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 16.3942115768 61% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1723.0 2260.96107784 76% => OK
No of words: 326.0 441.139720559 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28527607362 5.12650576532 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.56307096286 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1480120196 2.78398813304 113% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 204.123752495 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573619631902 0.468620217663 122% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 705.55239521 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.96107784431 121% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.76447105788 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.22255489022 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 19.7664670659 101% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.8473053892 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 57.7801652819 57.8364921388 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.15 119.503703932 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3 23.324526521 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.70786347227 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.25449101796 152% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.20758483034 122% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.67664670659 128% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247130670524 0.218282227539 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580370937819 0.0743258471296 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584332492922 0.0701772020484 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108002160115 0.128457276422 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0645968477111 0.0628817314937 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 14.3799401198 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.3550499002 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.197005988 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.5979740519 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.32208582834 105% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 98.500998004 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 12.3882235529 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.1389221557 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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