competitiveness is a positive quality for people in most societies. how does competitiveness affect individuals? is it a positive or negative trend?
These days, living in advance in technology, people tend to be more competitive. In my view, being competitive has some huge influent, which brings citizens to both negative and positive aspects.
On the one hand, there are numerous reasons why competition brings positive impacts on people. One reason people work in a competitive environment could be that by working with more competition, workers tend to work more productivity to compete with colleagues, which helps people to grow professionally and gain a lot of success in their life. In addition, competitiveness is a great personality in human lives, parents are expected to instruct their kids from an early age on how to become more competitive, which offered them gain higher academic performance in school as well as promotional work. To take Vietnam as a demonstration, from a 6 or 7 age, the governments encourage the citizens to teach the young generation to become competitive, which contributes them to becoming a better version of themselves.
On the other hand, there are some drawbacks that bring to the residents, In the first place, In order to reach their goals, they would be envious of co-workers. As a result, people are likely to work jealous, which causes them to reduce their productivity and always feel uncomfortable, this is a cause that could be unemployment. Another drawback could be that they could not get along with co-workers.
To sum up, Competitiveness is an indispensable part of our lives. It has both sides negative and positive aspects, I believe that workers are supposed to understand how to use their personality effectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, well, in addition, as a result, as well as, in my view, to sum up, in the first place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1369.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16603773585 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16593653559 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57358490566 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.9605441793 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.454545455 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0909090909 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2727272727 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168460323355 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0733251288444 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0659967922042 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121578880796 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0652899180481 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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