Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.
The statement given says that the men and women are not equally suited for many tasks because of their physical differences. But this statement is true only for some cases and cannot be considered true for all cases.There are many instances where a women can work and produce better results than a man.
Firstly, in some cases such as working in a place which involves a lot of weightlifting. In such cases, men are more efficient than women because most women might find it difficult in carrying weight. For instance, in a construction site, we can find that the majority of the people working there are men.
Secondly, when we consider a workplace which does not involve such weightlifting and focuses only on their skill, in such situations men and women are treated equally.For example, in most IT companies the men and women are treated based on their skill only and based on it they receive their promotions.
Furthermore, while housekeeping and maintaining their homes, both men and women are share their work equally because both of them are capable of the work. In these situations, we can say that regardless of their physical differences both of them can work equally and produce the same results.
Finally, we can come to a conclusion that the men and women can work together in the same job and produce the same results regardless of their physical differences.Only during some tasks the women find it difficult to produce the same results. But that it also being overcome in the current generation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, such as, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 58.6224719101 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1267.0 2235.4752809 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 258.0 442.535393258 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91085271318 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.55969084622 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72734121825 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 215.323595506 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.46511627907 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 395.1 704.065955056 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.422226605 60.3974514979 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.7 118.986275619 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8 23.4991977007 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.1 5.21951772744 251% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.409428920226 0.243740707755 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.173865294624 0.0831039109588 209% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.168160041295 0.0758088955206 222% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228646223633 0.150359130593 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.097331397145 0.0667264976115 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 48.8420337079 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 100.480337079 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.