Which of the following activities do you think will be the most beneficial to the environment? (1) Commute by biking or walking (2) Recycling (3) Eating a vegan diet
Along with the progress of human civilization and the complexity of society, human exploitation of the environment has caused much pollution, and now it is unavoidable to consider activities that could aid the environment. Thus, recently, a debate about which activities are most beneficial to the environment: commuting by biking or walking, recycling, or eating a vegan diet. Logically, people who grew up in diverse environments would certainly maintain various understandings of such an issue, but according to my rationale, recycling is an activity that is most advantageous to the environment. With intensive considerations, numerous bases are divulged to support the claim.
First of all, a lot of pollution is produced during the production of the product. With the advent of the Industrial Revolution, a variety of products are produced at an unprecedented speed and quantity. From this development, mankind benefited a lot, such as technical progression, and the overall quality of people's life. However, nature suffered a lot, because lots of pollution were formed by the production of products. An example of this situation could be observed in the production of plastic cups. Plastic cups are one of the products that are widely and frequently used around the world. The production of plastic cups creates air pollution from the factory and by-products such as chemical leftovers that cause water pollution. Yet, this problem can be alleviated through recycling. Recycling a product reduces the number of products being used and thrown away, therefore the industry does not have to produce more new products to meet the demand. Ultimately, as the production of new plastic cups reduces, the overall pollution created from processing plastic cups reduces.
On top of that, recycling reduces the amount of trash that is harmful to the environment, especially in the ecosystem. To be specific, due to the excessive trash, people dispose of those trash in the environment. As a consequence, many animals around the globe are suffering from the excessive trash disposed on their habitat. One typical example of this problem can be seen in the habitat of marine animals. Marine animals suffer from the waste created by humans, especially plastic products. These plastics harm marine animals in a variety of ways. One such way is that sea creatures tend to consider plastic products as their prey and consume them, and it is a serious problem since ingesting plastic products kills those animals. However, this kind of problem could be solved by recycling the products. By doing so, the number of waste products will reduce, therefore preventing waste from going to the place where it should not be in the environment.
In conclusion, from the above substantiation and assessments, it seems plausible to say that recycling is the activity that is most beneficial among the choices. Not only is recycling can reduce the pollution made by producing the products, but also, it can reduce the amount of trash that harms the ecosystem. Therefore, nothing in my mind regarding the previous issue overshadows the ideas stated above.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 407, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, regarding, so, therefore, thus, in conclusion, kind of, such as, first of all, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 79.0 52.1666666667 151% => OK
Nominalization: 26.0 8.0752688172 322% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2643.0 1977.66487455 134% => OK
No of words: 500.0 407.700716846 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.286 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72870804502 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96503558157 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 827.1 618.680645161 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7694455453 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.653846154 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2307692308 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76923076923 5.45110844103 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.85842293907 285% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153788516382 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0429427656974 0.076458572812 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.074897392092 0.0737576698707 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109471371941 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0811399592068 0.0645574589148 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 135.0 86.8835125448 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 10.002688172 170% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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