Some say that it would be better if the majority of employees worked fro home instead of travelling to a work place every day. Do you think the advantages of working from home outweigh the disadvantages?
In today's modern world, many individuals are of the opinion that it is working from home, rather than commuting to work that is a better choice for most employees. From my perspective, while this development can bring about some drawbacks, I would argue that they are eclipsed by the benefits
On the one hand, this trend could be disadvantageous to some extent. The main shortcoming is the negative effects on work productivity because it is likely that the employees can easily get distracted by several things, ranging from movies or online games to their offsprings or house chores. To illustrate, if a person does his tasks and takes care of children simultaneously, he might not accomplish his jobs punctually and may make more errors. Therefore, workers could not concentrate entirely on their work while being at home. Another drawback is that working online can result in poor social skills including communication and teamwork skills. This is because employees will be likely to have less chance to interact and communicate directly with their colleagues and clients
On the other hand, I am in the belief that the aforementioned disadvantages of home working could be outweighed by its advantages. One reason for this view is that it makes considerable contribution to strike a balance between work and life. In fact, many remote jobs also come with flexible schedules, which means that workers have the freedom to choose when and where they work, so they can have extra time to spend with their children or spouse. For instance, whether it is preparing breakfast for all members, dropping children off school, running soem errands or doing the housework, these are all easier to balance when they select remote work. Another reason is that commute stress can be solved when workers choose to conduct their tasks at home. This is because more than 30 minutes of daily one-way commuting is associated with increased levels of stress and anxiety. Recent research shows that removing the commute can help employees support their mental and physical health, since the time savings could allow them to focus on priorities outside of work, namely getting extra sleep in the morning, spending more time with family or getting in a workout
In conclusion, although the trend of online working could have some repercussions such as low work performance and poor social skills, its merits including better work-life balance and less commute stress seem to overshadow the negative impacts
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- Some say that it would be better if the majority of employees worked fro home instead of travelling to a work place every day Do you think the advantages of working from home outweigh the disadvantages 73
- Some say that it would be better if the majority of employees worked fro home instead of travelling to a work place every day Do you think the advantages of working from home outweigh the disadvantages 73
- Some say that it would be better if the majority of employees worked fro home instead of travelling to a work place every day Do you think the advantages of working from home outweigh the disadvantages 67
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, in short, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2091.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 407.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13759213759 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69371971533 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550368550369 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 631.8 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 112.580122685 49.4020404114 228% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 160.846153846 106.682146367 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.3076923077 20.7667163134 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92307692308 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279032068942 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105299040591 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728161911464 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193770053593 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0250759646397 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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