While many people argue that more public expenses
should be allocated to finding a cure to fatal diseases
like cancer, others say that this is impossible and the
government should use that money to improve the
public healthcare facilities.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Write an essay of at least 250 words to give reasons for
your answer and include any relevant examples from
your own knowledge or experience
Allocation is inevitable because demand is infinite and resources are not. How rationing takes place is important because it affects not only individual lives but also the most important values of society. Although ration has been defined in slightly different ways by different groups, most definitions revolve around one central idea: denying a treatment that benefits the patient on the grounds of scarcity. rare. It is appropriate to focus on potentially beneficial treatments because there are virtually no treatments in medicine that offer a definite benefit to the individual patient. In addition, the main point of contention is whether the potential benefit is large enough or probable enough to justify the cost. It's also important to note that not all health care cost control efforts involve portion allocation. For example, choosing a less expensive treatment over a more expensive one requires no allocation if both are equally effective because choosing the less expensive treatment will not result in the patient being denied a beneficial treatment. Trying to meet all of our health care needs can overwhelm our ability to provide the basic elements of other social goods, such as public safety, education, and defense. Therefore, the allocation of health care to some extent is necessary for the general well-being of society.
Health care allocation is necessary, unavoidable, and ethically complex. How rationing takes place is important because it affects not only individual lives but also what values are most important to society.
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...ly individual lives but also what values are most important to society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, well, for example, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1325.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47520661157 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79627522114 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582644628099 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5192868824 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.454545455 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27272727273 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0688286628436 0.244688304435 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0251586836278 0.084324248473 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0322070351166 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0459844124303 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0285754598376 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 0.67 Out of 6
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