More and more people want to buy famous brands of clothes, cars and other items. What are the reasons? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
It is globally the case expensive items and vehicles from well-known brands are becoming popular among people. This trend can be attributed to a number of reasons and I think this is a negative trend.
People are becoming more and more interested in luxury items because of several reasons. First of all, owning expensive things can make people happy. For instance, many people often reward themselves with a Gucci purse after a hardworking month or a Mercedes car when they get promoted because they think that those items deserve their efforts and this can make them feel motivated. Another clear reason is that people just want to show off. Possessing clothes or cars from famous brands is a way for people to be respected by others because nowadays, they are usually judged by their appearances and personal properties.
It is believed that this is a negative development due to some disadvantages that it causes to society. To begin with, a large amount of money is wasted on unnecessary items. A lot of people buy expensive items to satisfy themselves although they are not too rich and this might create a financial burden for them and their families. The second justifiable reason is this trend can be harmful to the environment. If consumption increases, production will be promoted, which uses a vast amount of material. Many trees would be cut down for woods or animals might be hunted for their beautiful fur to satisfy the customers’ needs.
In short, there are many factors that contribute to the increase in the number of people buying luxury clothes, cars or other items and this trend can be disadvantageous in many ways
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, well, for instance, i think, in short, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 7.0 286% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 29.0 5.60731707317 517% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1370.0 965.302439024 142% => OK
No of words: 278.0 196.424390244 142% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92805755396 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67653214743 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 106.607317073 146% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561151079137 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 283.868780488 151% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.683139329 43.030603864 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8571428571 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 5.23603664747 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245334403266 0.215688989381 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0821480612068 0.103423049105 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663077815816 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14552901395 0.15604864568 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0716282029665 0.0819641961636 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 40.7170731707 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, well, for instance, i think, in short, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 7.0 286% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 29.0 5.60731707317 517% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1370.0 965.302439024 142% => OK
No of words: 278.0 196.424390244 142% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92805755396 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67653214743 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 106.607317073 146% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561151079137 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 283.868780488 151% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.683139329 43.030603864 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8571428571 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 5.23603664747 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245334403266 0.215688989381 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0821480612068 0.103423049105 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663077815816 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14552901395 0.15604864568 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0716282029665 0.0819641961636 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 40.7170731707 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.