The charts below show the percentage of volunteers by organisations in 2008 and 2014.
The given pie charts illustrate the proportion of participants who do volunteer work in organisations between 2008 and 2014
In general, there are three out of the total six categories of volunteer organisations . While both Educational and environmental had the highest percentage in volunteer firms, health care had the least proportion in the number of people who volunteer in organisations from 2008 to 2014. Meanwhile, there was a significant change of sport , increasing under a half in two years
As can be seen from two different pie charts, the organisations contributed the highest proportion were environmental and education volunteers , increasing significantly around 21% in 2008 and 29% in 2014, followed by a slight decline of educational organisations from 24% in 2008 to 17% in 2014 . By contrast, volunteering in healthcare is the lowest proportion in organisations, the healthcare organisation is keeping the same which stood at 1 % over the period. However, sport organisations went through a significant change between 2008 and 2014 , rising remarkably nearly 15% in 2008 and 25% in 2014. On the other hand, Art group witnessed a moderate decrease in organisation of contributors from18% in 2008 to 12% in 2014 , while others from organisation categories declined significantly, approximately 15% in 2008 and 8% in 2014 .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, while, in general, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1135.0 965.302439024 118% => OK
No of words: 208.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45673076923 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.49975197534 2.65546596893 132% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557692307692 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 326.7 283.868780488 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 22.4926829268 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.7387437035 43.030603864 190% => OK
Chars per sentence: 189.166666667 112.824112599 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.6666666667 22.9334400587 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.23603664747 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 1.69756097561 825% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.427578869482 0.215688989381 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.229758510756 0.103423049105 222% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726951413949 0.0843802449381 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.308024145577 0.15604864568 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317940352647 0.0819641961636 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.6 13.2329268293 163% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 61.2550243902 60% => OK
smog_index: 14.6 6.51609756098 224% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 10.3012195122 161% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.98 11.4140731707 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 11.4329268293 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.9970731707 142% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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