Write a letter to a friend. You have borrowed something from your friend and it got damaged.
1. Apologize for damaging the product.
2. Explain what happened.
3. say how are you going to fix the issue
Dear Harman,
How have you been? I have had the most wonderful time during your visit to Toronto last month. Thank you again for letting me borrow your Apple wristwatch for my cousin’s engagement party. However, unfortunately it’s not working since last night and I am so very sorry for damaging it.
Last night, while I was at the party, I had accidentally spilled hot coffee over myself and your iWatch has not been working since then. Although it was an accident, I accept that it was my mistake and I’m feeling awful for this. Needless to say, I should have been more careful with the watch knowing that it was so precious for you.
Anyway, what’s done cannot be changed but to rectify this issue, I have sent the watch to Apple store to get it repaired. Besides, I had a conversation with customer service client and he assured that in case it does not get fixed, they can replace the watch with a new one and I will be more than happy to pay the bill.
Again, I am truly sorry, please forgive me.
Take care,
Shivani
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, besides, but, however, if, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 861.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55555555556 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28901877535 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3402198951 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.2727272727 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1818181818 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54545454545 4.34317383033 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164790653947 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641087609446 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626971197693 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0855001022457 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0882182270775 0.0580467560999 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.