Some people say that history is one of most important subjects. Other prople think that, in todays’s world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history.
Some people believe that history is one of the most crucial subjects. While other people state that, nowadays, subjects such as science and technology are more crucial than history. I will discuss both perspectives and I strongly agree with science and technology are more necessary subjects than history because of the devolopment of space and technology.
First of all, science and technology subjects have many benefits compared with a history class. Forexample: The majority of science technology companies and laboratories need the scientist who have deeper knowledge regarding to the science. In addition, we need to concentrate on science and technology subjects to prepare the proffesional scientists in the future. Moreover, scientists are conducting research about how to increase the chance that human live in other planet everyday. Not only focusing on the development of space, but also improving technologies that we have at the moment is one of the main reason that we should pay attention to these subjects rather than studying history.
Secondly, some people think that history is more crucial than science subjects. However, it has less benefits than studying science subjects. For instance: Students may have opportunities to learn about mistakes from the past. That’s why history class is only about medieval occasions occurred in the previous centuries. There is nothing about to create better chances and develop environment in the next decade.
All in all, some people think studying history class is more effective than studying science such as technology and science. In contrast, I believe that science subjects are more urgent due to the evolution of space and technology.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 477, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... chance that human live in other planet everyday. Not only focusing on the development o...
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Line 3, column 97, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun benefits is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
... than science subjects. However, it has less benefits than studying science subjects...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, may, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in addition, in contrast, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43396226415 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7773789991 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516981132075 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.12167654 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53333333333 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.39334924457 0.244688304435 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143965453269 0.084324248473 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104234403373 0.0667982634062 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.268664948015 0.151304729494 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0899909976674 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.