International air travel has a negative impact upon the environment and should
therefore be restricted. Do you agree or disagree?
It is generally believed that international air travel should be restricted due to its negative
effects on the environment. However, I think it is not a good solution because of some specific
reasons.
First, a convincing opinion to oppose the air travel restriction is that if the flights were
reduced, it would have a serious impact on the economy, support between countries and global
connection. Because the international air travel plays an important role in these aspects. For
example, most companies use airplane to bring their products abroad and receive a large
amount of income from other countries’ markets. In addition, nations always choose planes to
give food, medicine to poor countries in order to help them. Moreover, many people need to
travel abroad a lot by air travel. Therefore, if the international air travel was restricted, it would
create many difficulties in several fields.
Second, to save the environment out of the poison of air travel, human should advance
the plane to be more eco-friendly than restricted it. The method of using the sustainable energy
for planes such as hydrogen battery, electric engine is an efficient way to solve the problems
from its root.
The final reason which is no less important is that if the purpose is to limit the amount of
pollution to preserve the earth’s health, there are many factors cause more nature damage
than air travel which are land vehicles, company and plastic waste and deforestation so the
international air travel shouldn’t be the only responsible one for the global warming. Therefore,
the airplane shouldn’t be restricted especially when currently, the others aren’t changed and
developed to solve problems.
To conclude, the international air travel restriction is not a appropriate way with air travel’s
harm.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, i think, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1559.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37586206897 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95391676539 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593103448276 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.690287543 49.4020404114 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.923076923 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3076923077 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30769230769 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 20.0 4.38176352705 456% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318537015975 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121030851098 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103920528617 0.0667982634062 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0920574067351 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10920120608 0.056905535591 192% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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