In any situation, progress requires discussion among people who have contrasting points of view.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The major difference between a progressing mindset and a fixed mindset is to consider multiple views in order to grow.Any situation whether it is personal problem or any goal of a team to be achieved requires contrasting points in order to gain understanding of the factors that affect the hindrance of the progress.I certainly agree with the prompt that states for any situation progress requires discussion amongst people with contrasting points of view.Following are the two reasons explaining the my position
Firstly,considering contrasting points can often reveal the side that is unseen or unenlightened.It can be a huge source of feedback to get unstuck from the situation.People that have contrasting points,have those points in the first place for a particular reason.Usually they can see what the other person stuck in situation cannot see.For example,during elections we commonly consider every vote of the person whether it is contrasting or supporting.It ultimately helps us to bring growth in the country’s current situations.Some persons might have opposing view points against a leader and other might have supporting points.By means we gain the opportunity to evaluate the ideal leader for the country and thus boosts the progress of the country.Thus in this scenario the progress requires considering opposing points.
Secondly,discussion among people having opposing points can help to understand the situation deeply.It can often reveal the root cause of any bad situation and thus indirectly help to resolve it.For example recently the Dubai prince ordered the civil engineers to work on a project that was enormous and arduous.The project was regarding building a huge tower with unique curve shape and structure.The deadline for the project was very short and was demanding an early completion of the project for a particular cause.This situation was a havoc for the civil engineers as they were clueless on how to proceed in such situation.Then a glimmering hope came as in the form of team having points that were contradicting to engineers beliefs.Thus the team helped to build a top notch building by advising properly and ultimately resolved the panic situation of the engineers
In certain cases,considering contrasting opposing points can often derail and exacerbate the situation.But it is always witty to consider points of multiple perspectives as they reveal crucial information that sometimes is needed to progress in a situation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, thus, for example, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2098.0 2235.4752809 94% => OK
No of words: 382.0 442.535393258 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49214659686 5.05705443957 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.34520969357 2.79657885939 120% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513089005236 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 637.2 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 20.2370786517 10% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 191.0 23.0359550562 829% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 105.5 60.3974514979 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 1049.0 118.986275619 882% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 191.0 23.4991977007 813% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 50.5 5.21951772744 968% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 7.80617977528 384% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 10.2758426966 10% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232636521349 0.243740707755 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.186872616473 0.0831039109588 225% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639247244891 0.0758088955206 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149834309423 0.150359130593 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0896097659797 0.0667264976115 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 99.9 14.1392134831 707% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -130.85 48.8420337079 -268% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.92365168539 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 79.0 12.1743820225 649% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.75 12.1639044944 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 17.12 8.38706741573 204% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 97.0 100.480337079 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 55.0 11.8971910112 462% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 78.4 11.2143820225 699% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 79.0 11.7820224719 671% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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