Nowadays there are more opportunities for women than there were in the past. Some people think this situation caused more problems than it has solved.
What are your opinion on this?
The significance of women opportunities which were always debatable has become more contentious with many people claiming that it is beneficial while others disagree. However, women have more chances while some people believe that it creates more drawbacks rather than merits. This essay will explicate the reasons attributing to this trend along with remedial measures in the looming paragraphs.
To begin with, I completely argue with the first statement as we live in modern era, where everyone feels that men and women have equal rights for outdoor working. According to the women rights, they can provide different kinds of businesses as well as join in jobs just like a man and help family to financially. However, women are playing a great role in numerous sectors such as leading the government, managing the company and becoming a pilot. For instance, the government of Bangladesh is a woman who has led the country for ten years successfully. So, if women get support from families, they will be showed skills in different sectors. Hence, it is clearly stated that why many are the favor of this trend.
On the other hand, some individuals are supposed to be opposite from the first statement. Nowadays, divorce rates are higher than the past. In addition, the prominent reason of divorce is that women are working outside and spending less time with families as cannot manage home properly. According to these problems many females take decision to separate life from partners. Therefore, if men consider above drawbacks, women are getting more chance to develop in society.
To sum up, although it has few problems, however I totally agree with the benefits of working women and government should be taken some steps to solve this issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in addition, such as, as well as, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1473.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11458333333 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59523235939 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631944444444 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3946637535 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0666666667 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274659189387 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0803981736408 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656552522738 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16108917437 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0843353486591 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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