Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Technology plays in an important role in our lives. Technology provides us better facilities day by day as the number of days pass on. Many people think, life is easier and more comfortable now than it was when our grandparents were children and others would deny that. In my opinion, I agree with the former statement for two reasons, which I would provide in the following essay.
To begin with, we have more leisure time when compared to older days. Technology made our lives easier because most of our works around us are automated and there is no need to work hard to perceive anything. In contrast to the present world, older days were quite different. My personal example is a compelling example of this. My grandfather used to work a lot to earn a most basic pay. In older days, people used to work about ten hours a day, which, i am sure enervates us a lot. In addition, they were used to work six days a week. Whereas, I work as analyst in a software form and there is no need to perform any physical activity. I simply sit in a room predicting factors that can lift a product and forecasting it's performance in the future. Indeed I work just five days per week and 8 hrs a day. So, in summation, I work just 40 hours a week which provided me lot of leisure time. As I am free on saturday and sunday every week, I visit near by places which makes my mind get refreshed so that I can work more productively.
Furthermore, due to current innovations and advancements, technology do save a lot of time. In past, the activities used to take a lot of time. Contrary to the orthodox procedures, new technological devices did save a lot of time. For instance, in the olden days, stoves were the only source to perform any activity related to cooking. However, there are many good devices which make cooking easy and time efficient task. The introduction of blenders, toaster ovens , mixers, microwaves do facilitate cooking in saving time a lot. Infact, there is no need keep strenous efforts in accomplishing any of the cooking tasks we daily encounter.
In conclusion, I agree that life is much easier now than lives of my grandparents when they were young. Not only do we have a lot of leisure time but also we are saving lot of time and efforts.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 454, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...d to work about ten hours a day, which, i am sure enervates us a lot. In addition...
^
Line 2, column 507, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[5]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'used to working'.
Suggestion: used to working
...rvates us a lot. In addition, they were used to work six days a week. Whereas, I work as ana...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 751, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Indeed,
...ecasting its performance in the future. Indeed I work just five days per week and 8 hr...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 947, Rule ID: NEAR_BY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
Suggestion: nearby
...saturday and sunday every week, I visit near by places which makes my mind get refreshe...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 92, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'In the past'?
Suggestion: In the past
...ents, technology do save a lot of time. In past, the activities used to take a lot of t...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 465, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... introduction of blenders, toaster ovens , mixers, microwaves do facilitate cookin...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, whereas, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, in contrast to, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1845.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 410.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66931821572 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529268292683 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 603.0 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.0702789051 48.9658058833 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.8 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.96 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154900664102 0.236089414692 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0460257461595 0.076458572812 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684248311136 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115433238384 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0660882946657 0.0645574589148 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 11.7677419355 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 454, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...d to work about ten hours a day, which, i am sure enervates us a lot. In addition...
^
Line 2, column 507, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[5]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'used to working'.
Suggestion: used to working
...rvates us a lot. In addition, they were used to work six days a week. Whereas, I work as ana...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 751, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Indeed,
...ecasting its performance in the future. Indeed I work just five days per week and 8 hr...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 947, Rule ID: NEAR_BY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
Suggestion: nearby
...saturday and sunday every week, I visit near by places which makes my mind get refreshe...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 92, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'In the past'?
Suggestion: In the past
...ents, technology do save a lot of time. In past, the activities used to take a lot of t...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 465, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... introduction of blenders, toaster ovens , mixers, microwaves do facilitate cookin...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, whereas, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, in contrast to, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1845.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 410.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66931821572 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529268292683 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 603.0 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.0702789051 48.9658058833 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.8 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.96 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154900664102 0.236089414692 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0460257461595 0.076458572812 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684248311136 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115433238384 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0660882946657 0.0645574589148 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 11.7677419355 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.