Some say that because many people are living much longer, the age at which people retire from work should be raised considerable.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
One of the most common arguments held by the masses is whether or not to increase the retirement age considerably while the average life expectancy of citizens is increasing. Personally, I disagree entirely with this view and believe that there are no reason to raise the age of retirement. The reasons for my position are as follows.
First of all, rising retirement ages mean that humans will continue working for a longer time, and it is undeniable that this will have various noxious consequences on human mental health. Working, therefore, is one of the predominant factors in many pathologies at retirement age. It is rather clear to some extent, this may result in heart-related disease, and memory disorders like Alzheimer’s which pose a menace to organizations or enterprises. People may no longer have enough physical strength to retain acceptable working performance.
There are compelling arguments that raising the retirement age has a negative impact on the quality of the labor force. Under certain assumptions, this can be interpreted as limiting workplace innovation and creativity because working opportunities for the younger generation, who are supposed to be a source of creativity and a dynamic workforce, are narrowed. For example, while people just work for 40-45 years before retiring at the age of 60 or 65, if we increase the retirement age to 70, it leads to the consequence that their subordinates have to wait another 5 years to get promoted and give up the position to younger executives.
As already discussed in the above essay, I strongly believe that people should not raise the retirement age significantly due tothe negative consequences it might have on human wholeness, organizations, and the workforce. I, therefore, firmly the age of retirement should not be changed, regardless of age-induced raise.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 56, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
... common arguments held by the masses is whether or not to increase the retirement age consider...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, so, therefore, while, for example, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1560.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28813559322 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12882274086 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583050847458 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.5949435157 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.0 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5833333333 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298588093125 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101362053228 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428383933405 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17137064613 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394310297019 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.