From 2005 to 2009 the line graph illustrates the enrolment rate of students from three different nations at Sheffield University

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From 2005 to 2009, the line graph illustrates the enrolment rate of students from three different nations at Sheffield University.

Overall, the number of Iranian and Turkish academics applying to universities increased. At the same time, the number of those from Greece suffered an inverse trend.

Initially, the statistics for Iran and Turkey were nearly identical, with only 20 pupils separating them. More than a year later, the number of Turkish students enrolled topped that of Iran, with the former seeing a significantly larger spike than the latter. In the years thereafter, these statistics have steadily increased, with a considerable rise of more than 50 in the number of Iranian students in 2008. As a result, Iran and Turkey reached maxima of 160 and 120, respectively.

Meanwhile, beginning with 180 pupils, the number for Greek scholars was far greater than the others; nonetheless, it thereafter witnessed a significant decrease by more than half. Following that, one-year stability was seen in 2007, followed by a dramatic drop in 2009 to less than a fifth of the initial level.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, nonetheless, while, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 816.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 157.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1974522293 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83538950559 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649681528662 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.0504301594 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.625 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 5.23603664747 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0758048377071 0.215688989381 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0350193804514 0.103423049105 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0384371277837 0.0843802449381 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0585394638033 0.15604864568 38% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431881568304 0.0819641961636 53% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.06136585366 119% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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