In today's competitive world, many families find it necessary for both parents to go out to work. While some say the children in these families benefit from the additional income, others feel they lack support because of their parents' absence.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
In the past, the typical family is men make houses, women make homes. But today in the competitive and fair world it is norm for both parents go to work. This situation can affect children both advantages and disadvantages. But in my point of view, I think they should spend more time to your children in the evening after work.
On the one hand, a wealthy family with successful parents can provide an advantageous role for their children in which their parents can afford them a more luxurious and convenient life with smartphones, a good education, new clothing, and so on. And wealthy parents can afford to provide their children with more opportunities to gain life experience. For example, taking a foreign trip during a vacation.
On the other hand, a family where parents don’t have time for their children can let them into a wrong way because their children don’t have enough support and attention: meaning that these children might not do as well at school because there is no one teach them or help them to do homework. Without the attention of parents can let children into drugs or underage drinking which will destroy their children future.
In conclusion, I believe that we can not change the fact that both parents need to go to work nowadays. It is an ideal situation, parents can speed their free time in evening or in day off to play with their children or they help their children in study such as homework or they can teach them a essential soft skills.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 294, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...such as homework or they can teach them a essential soft skills.
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Line 4, column 311, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'skill'?
Suggestion: skill
...or they can teach them a essential soft skills.
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1225.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71153846154 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51342843248 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526923076923 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 363.6 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.4257308758 49.4020404114 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.363636364 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6363636364 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.45454545455 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299160978033 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128075879656 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0832020448969 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195920132289 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418644681652 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 78.4519038076 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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