Some countries spend a lot of money preparing competitors to take part in major competitions such as Olympic Games or football World Cup. Some people say that it would be better to spend this money encouraging children to take up sports from a young age.
To what extent to you agree or disagree?
In this day and age, sport is becoming more and more popular with people of all ages. While I partly agree with some individuals who argue that the governments should use money to encourage the participation of the youth in sport activities, I believe that investing this money for training professionals is more significant.
On the one hand, there are a couple of reasons why some people agree with the idea of using money to motivate children to play sports. First and foremost, it is obvious that many parents want their offspring to have both strong physical and mental health, and playing sports is one of the most efficacious methods to improve it. Indeed, many researchs claim that people joining sports activities are greatly stronger and have more stamina. Moreover, playing sports can also give adolescents the opportunities to improve their social skills. This is due to the fact that they have to cooperate, as well as communicate with their partners.
On the other hand, the outcomes of helping competitors prepare for their major sport competitions are remarkable. To commence with, getting prizes in such popular competitions such as the Olympic or World Cup brings many merits to the countries. It can motivate the popularity of the nations, therefore, have a beneficial impact on the nation's economy since many corporations from other countries will invest their money to base their headquarters and companies in them. Another benefit of it is that competitors who win the prize are likely to become influential figures, which can set an important example for many citizens, especially for the teenagers. Cristiano Ronaldo and Lionel Messi, 2 of the greatest and most successful footballers over the period, for illustrate, have inspired thousands of kids to play soccer.
In conclusion, it seems to me that spending money for professionals is as important as using it to encourage children to play sports.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1624.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17197452229 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84828771553 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550955414013 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0551950901 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.923076923 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1538461538 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.30769230769 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224036372844 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786695147574 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566122672441 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139564448639 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318477026977 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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