Nowadays the football supporters behave violently. What is the cause? How can we solve it?
games and sports are a part of our life. football is known as the universal sport.Recently, the football hooliganism has increased significantly. this essay elucidates the reasons and the manoeuvres to resolve it.
To embark on, the primary reason for football vandalism among fans is the bond with their team playing for their country or club. For instance, a sports match between India and Pakistan will always create a stir among the supporters which will lead to violence. Secondly, people involve in wagering on their favourite team or players. Because of this, not only money is lost, but also paves a way for brutality.As a consequence, the common people and the game lovers are impacted.
Despite, considering the diverse angles of this phenomenon, we can combat these issues by implementing effective measures. Cognisance should be created about the repercussion of violence. The damage made to the properties and spectators should be conveyed by the media and the players. In addition to this, government should enact strict laws against it. If anyone doesn't abide by the law, then they should be imprisoned. Do you think these acts alleviate violence? Certainly, a grave issue like brutal behaviour can be tackled by implementing these solutions.For example, betting in cricket had created many mob wars. However, it was mitigated drastically by imposing stringent rules of the government.
In conclusion, even though there are multifarious factors which attributes to football hooliganism like team bonding and wagering. it can be solved by stern legal actions and awareness.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1350.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37848605578 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95930934266 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.657370517928 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.5503444374 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.4117647059 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7647058824 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.17647058824 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0980969158867 0.244688304435 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0277538070667 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407331965731 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0643952326069 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308999541177 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.33 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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