The diagram below shows the manufacturing process of instant noodles

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The diagram below shows the manufacturing process of instant noodles..

The flowchart illustrates manufacturing of instant noodles.

Overall, the process is taken place in eight stages, from transferring stored flour in storage soils to labeling and sealing producted noodles.

To begin with, flour which stored in storage soils transferred to be mixed with water oil in the mixer. Rollers then roll mixed result and turn them into dough sheets. Then a specific industrial machine change the style of sheets into dough strips for further uses. After that, noodles are shaped into noodles discs because of alternatives that tools made on them. Then these noodles disks are cooked in the oil =and dried to be preper to store in cups, while this cups, however, include vegetables and spices. Last but not least, cups having ionstant noodles will have a label and a seal on them, and will be ready to consume by using certain machinery after all. In all stages, rollers help the flow to transfer noodles to the next steps of manufacturing.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 461, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ed to be preper to store in cups, while this cups, however, include vegetables and s...
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Line 5, column 768, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e next steps of manufacturing.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, then, while, after all, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 826.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 162.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0987654321 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44871182568 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.672839506173 0.547539520022 123% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.5010920994 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.7777777778 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 5.23603664747 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129654140786 0.215688989381 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0579166657408 0.103423049105 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630566217259 0.0843802449381 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112285083439 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0674777502751 0.0819641961636 82% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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