Some people believe that big multinational companies benefit the host countries. Others argue that they are harmful to the economies of developing countries. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
People have different views about the role that multinational corporations (MNCs) play in nations. While other people agree that MNCs can damage the economies of the under-developed countries. From my point of view, I would say both arguments have validity, but I would lean toward the former.
On the one hand, there are two key reasons why multinational companies are seen as damaging to developing countries. First of all, the MNCs can drive domestic businesses out of the market. It is evident that global companies such as Apple, Samsung, and Microsoft are being dominated in the labor market which would make it hard for small local businesses to survive. Secondly, the global corporation can lead to environmental pollution and exploit the non-renewable natural resources, which can definitely pose a threat to developing nations. For instance, in Vietnam, recently a number of MNCs such as Formosa Plastic have discharged toxic waste containing cyanide and carboxylic acids into the surrounding water, leading to 18 tonnes of fish deaths along coastal provinces in northern Thanh Hoa.
On the other hand, the benefits of MNCs outweigh the drawbacks because it can lead to a healthy economy results in job creation. It means that if the government allows multinationals to operate in their countries, these companies will require massive employees and it will create more job opportunities for local people. To illustrate, the new Lego factory in Vietnam will invest more than 1 billion dollars to create up to 4,000 jobs for Vietnamese people. Another advantage of MNCs is cutting-edge technology. When MNCs set up headquarters in growth nations, these nations can inherit modern technology such as cyber security or fintech from it. As a result, MNCs will help progress the economy in developing countries.
In conclusion, some people are of the opinion that MNCs can threat to growth countries, but I believe that the activities of large multinational corporations mostly benefit the economy of developing nations
- BAR CHART WRITING TASK 1 73
- Some people believe that big multinational companies benefit the host countries Others argue that they are harmful to the economies of developing countries Discuss both views and give your opinion 78
- Many people feel it is a waste of money to try to save endangered animal species for example the tiger or the blue whale To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 78
- Wrting task 1 11
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 98, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...onal corporations MNCs play in nations. While other people agree that MNCs can damage...
^^^^^
Line 6, column 207, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...enefit the economy of developing nations
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, while, as for, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1709.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30745341615 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96537669976 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583850931677 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.9288024021 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.933333333 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4666666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156789933127 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597000967997 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646211430281 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127640334575 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0737948500068 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 98, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...onal corporations MNCs play in nations. While other people agree that MNCs can damage...
^^^^^
Line 6, column 207, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...enefit the economy of developing nations
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, while, as for, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1709.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30745341615 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96537669976 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583850931677 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.9288024021 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.933333333 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4666666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156789933127 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597000967997 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646211430281 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127640334575 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0737948500068 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.