Some people say that nowadays children have an easy life, and some people think that the life of children was easier in the past. Discuss both points of view and also provide relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is clear that children’s lives changes to the rhythm of social development. At different periods, young generation faces contextual chances as well as hardships and it is reasonable to acknowledge that they all have equally comfortable life.
Regarding the present, young people possess the convenience of technology, Internet and well-being merits. Due to uncountable internet-based gadgets and inventions, children can easily entertain or study thus achieving happiness and success. For example, nowadays if children do not have traditional toys, they can choose to play with Playstation, Ipad, smart watch. Besides, the availability of natural resources such as water and food is noteworthy because they no longer suffer from hunger or are deprived of basic needs as in the past. This ensures young people a healthy and balanced lifestyle and make it easy for them to thrive into good citizens.
Turning to the past generations, the youth easily developed as they tend to lead a more stress-free and healthier life. For instance, 40 years ago the burden of becoming academic competent for Vietnamese teenagers was minimal and students were allowed to enjoy 3 months of summer without extra classes. Children’s mental disorders at that time were less complex as there were fewer obligations and social clashes putting them in conundrums. Also, children then had the benefit of good quality environment which fostered better heath.
In conclusion, children of all generations have their own ways of enjoying life. It is always adults’ responsibility to ensure the most favourable conditions for youngsters to grow.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, regarding, so, then, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1376.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46031746032 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98806098338 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.686507936508 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2279235021 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.846153846 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3846153846 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.69230769231 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192631718677 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622505500539 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427475644518 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109144679515 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0168465440177 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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