Many parents give jobs to their children to do around the house in order to develop their characters and self-sufficiency.
Discuss this idea and give your opinion.
Raising a child properly needs having thought about how to teach, or show them different aspects of life, that would help them to become more successful individuals. It is believed that by giving the kids responsibility in their own house, such as handling the normal daily house chores, they will gain self-confidence and it would be great for their personality as well. I totally support this idea of upbringing kids with multi-tasks, including routine works related to their home. I will mention them in this essay.
Apparently, aside from providing good nutrition and appropriate health care, kid’s character should be trained at an early age by their parents or the people who are in charge, their custodians. The first step would be to teach them how to manage the basic works such as cleaning their own bedroom or organizing their clothes in the wardrobe. Not only they would feel useful and appreciated but also we would help them to realize an important lesson, taking responsibility. If every child completely understands that handling every trivial thing,(?) such as washing their own bathtub, is on their burden, they will become better citizens in their society. Moreover, it is unlikely of them to have high expectations of others.
By helping them to be independent, they will become more confident in their ability. Therefore, they can make their choices in life by considering different aspects of life more realistically. For example, when they want to start to have a new family, they have a better understanding of the amount of responsibility ahead of them. Not to mention that when it comes to them having kids, they would not expect others to take care of their own children. Consequently, they would never feel they cannot survive in their college, apart from their parents, because of not being able to cook for themselves, for example, or not knowing how to manage their money spending per month. They will become more knowledgeable in different aspects of social life.
To summarize the discussion, making children become mature in terms of their ability in life, can be achieved through various works they can do around their house either by themselves or with the help of others. This can be helpful in making them more responsible, confident, knowledgeable, and being multi-functional persons. In my ,opinion it is always better to teach our children as many tasks as we can. It is just like giving them many possible paths in their life without being afraid of their own capability.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...works such as cleaning their own bedroom or organizing their clothes in the wardr...
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Suggestion: Such
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, consequently, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, apart from, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 64.0 24.0651302605 266% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2105.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 418.0 315.596192385 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03588516746 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81187607387 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516746411483 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 634.5 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 5.43587174349 294% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3365366966 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.25 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232220786233 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0779499970883 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674563096224 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16174374528 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476156341887 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 299, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...works such as cleaning their own bedroom or organizing their clothes in the wardr...
^^
Line 3, column 548, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , ?
...stands that handling every trivial thing,? such as washing their own bathtub, is o...
^^
Line 3, column 551, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Such
...nds that handling every trivial thing,? such as washing their own bathtub, is on the...
^^^^
Line 7, column 333, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...nd being multi-functional persons. In my ,opinion it is always better to teach our...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, consequently, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, apart from, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 64.0 24.0651302605 266% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2105.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 418.0 315.596192385 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03588516746 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81187607387 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516746411483 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 634.5 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 5.43587174349 294% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3365366966 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.25 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232220786233 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0779499970883 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674563096224 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16174374528 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476156341887 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.