It is a natural process for animal species to become extinct. There is no reason why people should try to prevent this from happening. Do you agree or disagree?
It is true that numerous kinds of animal have gone extinct without human ỉnterfere. Therefore, many individuals argue that it would be unecessary for people to make effort to avoid this extinction. In my perspective, I strongly disagree this opinion and reasons behind it will be stated in upcoming paragraphs.
First and foremost, animals need to be protected at all cost because they play a vital role in the natural environment. Most animals, even insects, enrich biodiversity and nurture their living habitat. For example, the black bears in North America consume salmons from a nereby river then dispose the remains around the jungle, which helps boost soil quality and provide nutrients for plant growth. This means plants, which are a crucial part of our food supplement and helps reduce CO2 emissions, can not survive without daily activities of animals. Negative affects on climate and inadequate food supply may occure if we do not take action in protecting living species.
At the same time, if we do not implement practices to preserve animals, an immense amount of criminal act will take place. Overfishing, illegal hunting, animal smuggling,.. are several crime that are rising at a speedy rate. This is due to certain body parts of animals are used to produce clothes, medicines,..etc. In addition, natural disasters have always been hazarded animals acommodation and threatened their lives. It is clear that animals, especially endangered ones, are at the edge of extinction. Thus, raising people's awareness and hunting restrictions are critical at this point.
In conclusion, it is unavoidable that some animal species may die out because of natural incidents, but in my view we should have thorough solutions in order to preserve and protect existing animals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 42, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'practices preserving'.
Suggestion: practices preserving
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Line 5, column 170, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...shing, illegal hunting, animal smuggling,.. are several crime that are rising at a...
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Line 5, column 171, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...hing, illegal hunting, animal smuggling,.. are several crime that are rising at a ...
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Line 5, column 174, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Are
...g, illegal hunting, animal smuggling,.. are several crime that are rising at a spee...
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Line 5, column 178, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[8]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun crime seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'some crime'.
Suggestion: some crime
...llegal hunting, animal smuggling,.. are several crime that are rising at a speedy rate. This ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...s are used to produce clothes, medicines,..etc. In addition, natural disasters hav...
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Line 5, column 310, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
... are used to produce clothes, medicines,..etc. In addition, natural disasters have...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, so, then, therefore, thus, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in my view, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30633802817 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81109216125 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.669014084507 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.6690363909 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1875 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9375 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194656341753 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0532077338301 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.034261689245 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112705912099 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0287362595658 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.