Is recent year, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Use specific reasons and example to support your answer.
Food is an essential source of human’s life. In the modern civilization, preparing the dishes of meal are convenient and exhust. As the result, it has improved a standard of people’s lives. This essay show innovation in the cooking fields helps improve the quality of better life style.
First of all, invention of various household equipment support to finish many house cleaning task in less time and without trying. Presently, blender is produced with many different uses such as mix, cooking nut milk, squeezing juice, making ice cream, and cooking porridge, for instance. The machines are very quite and don’t take much time, it is also easy to use. Secondly, material of kitchen equipment make the cooking process more save without fire avoidance. Induction stove or microwave oven is manufacture to warm food uncomplicate. It’s active by electricity and there isn’t getting burned by touching like we were using the gas stove.
Actually, deparment stores have get packet and easy prepared food with detail order about how to cook. Up to now, the fast food have trend in street. Young people is a piece of cake to boil packet eatable is save time and normally.
In conclusion, the development of new cooking technologies benefits us greatly, particularly in term of trying new cuishine and obtaining a delicious new tastle with our tougue in less time and effort.
Sentence: This essay show innovation in the cooking fields helps improve the quality of better life style.
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Sentence: Secondly, material of kitchen equipment make the cooking process more save without fire avoidance.
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Sentence: Induction stove or microwave oven is manufacture to warm food uncomplicate.
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Sentence: Actually, deparment stores have get packet and easy prepared food with detail order about how to cook.
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Sentence: Young people is a piece of cake to boil packet eatable is save time and normally.
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Sentence: Actually, deparment stores have get packet and easy prepared food with detail order about how to cook.
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Sentence: In conclusion, the development of new cooking technologies benefits us greatly, particularly in term of trying new cuishine and obtaining a delicious new tastle with our tougue in less time and effort.
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