2.When you have some disagreements with other people, will you choose to convince them or respect the difference?
Respect differences
a.it is perfectly normal / we should be open-minded / learn from others / get new perspectives / mature thinking
avoid conflicts / maintain good relationship –no one likes opinionated or stubborn people
Respecting Differences: The Key to Building Stronger Relationships
In today's world, it's quite common to encounter disagreements with other people. It could be on a variety of topics, ranging from politics to personal preferences. When faced with such situations, it's essential to choose between convincing others or respecting differences. In my opinion, respecting differences is the better choice. In this essay, I will elaborate on the reasons for this stance.
Firstly, it is perfectly normal to have different opinions. Everyone comes from different backgrounds, has unique experiences, and possesses distinct values and beliefs. Therefore, it's not surprising that people have varying perspectives on different issues. Being open-minded and respecting these differences can help us learn from others and gain new perspectives. By doing so, we can broaden our horizons and develop more mature thinking.
Secondly, respecting differences can help avoid conflicts and maintain good relationships. No one likes opinionated or stubborn people who refuse to listen to others. When we respect differences, we show that we value the other person's opinion and are willing to consider their perspective. This approach can lead to constructive discussions and help us understand each other better. Moreover, it can help us build stronger relationships based on mutual trust and understanding.
Thirdly, when we respect differences, we encourage others to do the same. By setting an example of open-mindedness and tolerance, we can create a culture of respect and understanding. This culture can promote healthy discussions and lead to positive changes in society. Moreover, it can help bridge the gap between different communities and promote social harmony.
In conclusion, respecting differences is the better approach when faced with disagreements. It's essential to recognize that everyone has their own opinion, and it's perfectly normal to have different perspectives. By respecting these differences, we can learn from others, avoid conflicts, and build stronger relationships based on mutual trust and understanding. Ultimately, it can help us become better individuals and contribute to a more harmonious society.
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- 2 When you have some disagreements with other people will you choose to convince them or respect the difference Respect differences a it is perfectly normal we should be open minded learn from others get new perspectives mature thinking avoid conflicts ma 70
- 2 When you have some disagreements with other people will you choose to convince them or respect the difference Respect differences a it is perfectly normal we should be open minded learn from others get new perspectives mature thinking b avoid conflicts 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 229, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...rences, we show that we value the other persons opinion and are willing to consider the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1903.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 328.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.80182926829 4.8611393121 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.3106316917 2.67179642975 124% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530487804878 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 572.4 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.0347889008 48.9658058833 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.7391304348 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2608695652 20.6045352989 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.86956521739 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.369487926852 0.236089414692 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111865729537 0.076458572812 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0826026720049 0.0737576698707 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199244319481 0.150856017488 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0844819508624 0.0645574589148 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 58.1214874552 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.77 10.9000537634 145% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.