Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on every day matters is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
For creating the best generation in the future, each parrents should give ocassions to their children for making some decision by their self as the results the children will have ability to critical thinking. The most important to teaching the children is controlling from the parrents until they have awareness to pick the good and bad way in life. In my opinion, sometimes children should be determined the best option in their life but making some restriction to avoid their self being selfish person.
In other words, in children life sometimes they will be faced with situation that they should be make some decision. For instance, when the child in the social situation the will found many people with differents disposition and sometimes one of them can give bad or good impact for life at that time the child should make the best decision for determined their way whether to positif or negative track. On the other hand, through decision that their pick it is can establish their confidence to look at the situation in the future. Moreover, each child with the best attitude have capable to thinking critical until they know what should they do in that situation because every single person that be brave to take some decision in their self have a leadership soul.
Furthermore, someone with the higher confidence can change their mindset. Some people with the many situation was passed have a lot of learning that can be plucked, whereas they forget about their self until became arrogant person. This circumstances is not good for the children because they being selfish and only follow their instinct without thinking another people or appropriate with the condition.
To conclude, i belive that every child have abilities to decided what is the best way in their life and the situation can be main factor to sever a next stage and the parrents should be controlling the child to taking the choice.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 98, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'made'?
Suggestion: made
...aced with situation that they should be make some decision. For instance, when the c...
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Line 3, column 95, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun situation seems to be countable; consider using: 'many situations'.
Suggestion: many situations
...nge their mindset. Some people with the many situation was passed have a lot of learning that ...
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Line 3, column 251, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[4]
Message: You should probably use: 'are'.
Suggestion: are
...ame arrogant person. This circumstances is not good for the children because they ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, whereas, for instance, in fact, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1590.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9226006192 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44191010844 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.448916408669 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.5479954276 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.545454545 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3636363636 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0909090909 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250964513568 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119683436638 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599528555888 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166096045156 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0755562913183 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.85 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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