The diagram below shows how oil is expected in the use of production of perfume

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The diagram below shows how oil is expected in the use of production of perfume.

The picture depicts the process of a perfumery manufacturing system from oil.
Looking at the picture, it can be seen that there are 4 consecutive main steps in the production of perfume, commencing with the heating of the input water and ending with the creation of the refined hydrolat.
In the first stage of the process, water inside an airtight container was boiled by a heat source using fire. After boiling water evaporates forming steam, it will follow a pipe which leads to a second container. The process continues with using steam to increase the temperature of the aromatic plants which are placed in the middle of the container. Then the mixture of steam and oil vapor will continue to go through the pipe which sends them to the condenser
After the completion of this stage, the steam and oil vapor are delivered and condensed using a spring-shaped tube inside the container. Hot water makes the mixture turn into liquid again and cold water plays a role as a condensate. In the final stage, the mixture of essential oil and water is separated to create a hydrolat called aromatic water. This extracting will be used by consumers for different

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, second, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 963.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8391959799 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61686040608 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572864321608 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.9578212908 43.030603864 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1111111111 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.23603664747 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103306293403 0.215688989381 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0442384301667 0.103423049105 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0278089726624 0.0843802449381 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0620323781948 0.15604864568 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0182222996085 0.0819641961636 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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