The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart shows how percentage of citizens were born in Australia and those were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town changed from 1995 to 2010.
Overall, it was quite noticable that the propotion of those who were born in Cities in both inside and outside Australia was the highest most of the year.
In 1995, the percentage of people who were born in Cities both inside and outside Australia was the highest, included 50% and 60% in turn, while the propotion of those borning in Rural areas was lower, about 30% and 40% respectively. The last propotion of people were born in Towns was lowest, about 20% and 10% in turn.
In 2010, as can be seen the percentage of people who were born in Cities reached a peak of 60% outside Australia, with higher than the figure for in Australia, to approximately 65%. In contrast, the percentage of people who were born in Towns and Rural areas in Australia were equal, which were about 18%, it was quite noticable that the figure were seen in outside Australia in both Towns and Rural areas hit the lowest points, about 14% and 10% respectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.0 243% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 919.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66497461929 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40041953955 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.421319796954 0.547539520022 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 275.4 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.6465168002 43.030603864 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.166666667 112.824112599 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.8333333333 22.9334400587 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.513222248621 0.215688989381 238% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.31815115655 0.103423049105 308% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131238956237 0.0843802449381 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.371715952621 0.15604864568 238% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.145373918478 0.0819641961636 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.2329268293 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.92 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.34 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.4329268293 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.