Extreme or adventure sports are becoming more popular among teenagers. What are advantages and disadvantages of doing these types of sport?
Nowadays when people and especially teenagers more and more under stress they need to figure out how to cope with it. One of the ways to do it is extreme and adventure sports that are consequently increasing in popularity among teens. This essay will suggest that destressing effect of this dangerous sports is the main advantage of that kind of sports for teenagers while the possibility to lose his or her life is drawback.
First of all, when person participate in dangerous sport, he experienced increasing feelings due to the adrenaline released. When he or she feels that there is danger for their life exists all receptors in that teens body start working extremely well and then that person tend to forget about all the stress. Also, when the adrenaline is realized it most likely to remove stress hormones from your body. AVL research says that those children who regularly join adventure sports groups are 30 percent less under stress and foe those who did extreme sports this percent doubled.
There must be a something bad associated with something with that many advantages. For those two kinds of sports that I mentioned in my essay before that is a risk of death during participation in it. Due to the fact that something extreme always interconnected with chance to death its challenging to inspire yourself to take to start your way and even then if teenager is very scared during participation the chance to become dead is enhancing enormously. To prove it, there is AVL research that provides information on that theme:” there are 10% of teenagers dying during extreme sports events due t” it says.
Thus, participation in adventures and extreme sports can be advantageous for those children who experienced increasing stress level. But there is always a chance to die during the process.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, so, then, thus, well, while, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 7.30460921844 274% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1515.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98355263158 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70857548282 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542763157895 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9658198492 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.538461538 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3846153846 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283934229471 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10201629507 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0952165073826 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184762918935 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0921458761686 0.056905535591 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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