Many think that it is very difficult for people to maintain a healthy lifestyle in today's world. Others, however, feel that it is easy for people to be healthy and fit if they want to
Nowadays when people be more and more under pressure it is important to them to maintain their body functionality. But not each person thinks that it is an easiest task to achieve, some of them argue that its almost infeasible to keep in shape in the nowadays life, while others say that it’s not a very hard task to achieve. In my opinion both views are correct in some way.
On one hand, I agree that keep fit properly is not something that can be achieved easily. So, when he or she spends most of time on a job and during life problems solvation they can’t channel appropriate effort into their health. However, sometimes, mindset “I have no time” is a cover for abnormal laziness. Furthermore, it could be argued that maintaining in some way healthy style of living do not requires much effort.
On the other hand, those people who support the view that being healthy is easy tend to be teenagers. In fact, scholars and students have strong immune system and metabolism and they rarely experience problems even with sicknesses let alone extra fat. That’s by no means defines that our body functionality degrades during all the period of ageing but at some point is does, and to keep fit he or she needs to put in more and more effort.
To conclude, I believe that difficulty of being healthy is the harder the older you are. Also, it depends on the amounts of free time person have.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 154, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
.... But not each person thinks that it is an easiest task to achieve, some of them a...
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Line 2, column 402, Rule ID: DONT_NEEDS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'require'?
Suggestion: require
...some way healthy style of living do not requires much effort. On the other hand, those...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, while, in fact, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1151.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.604 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43548763085 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4203279196 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.9166666667 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8333333333 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41666666667 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209891112864 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691535544681 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686672874507 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112620624083 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0263443728842 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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