Many offenders commit more crimes after serving their first punishment. Why is this happening and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?
It is often evident that many criminals with a past criminal record are being involved in crimes after they have served their first punishment. The reasons associated with such circumstances and suitable solutions to tackle the problem is discussed in this essay.
Firstly, the major reason behind it can be the factors leading to difficulty adjustments in public. One of which is a perception many socieyand people in general hold for such person. This directly hampers his/her approach to love a normal life with a new beginning. For example, due to lack of job opportunities, mistreatment, inacceptance in a community and so on. Furthermore, depending on the time served for a punishment, the in-between gap can also create a major challenges for them to overcome. This causes them to struggle inorder to pick up the pace and adapt with the novel sys, if there's any. All of these act as a hindrance and not everyone would be able to properly deal with it which forces them again into illegal activities.
However, these problems can be avoided by building a better society with welcoming nature where anyone willing to sustain with good deeds can thrive especially criminal offenders who wants to genuinely change for good. To achieve this, general awareness is a requirement with establishment of groups or foundations to support them, helping them find a job and hence make a decent living. In addition, trainings and skill development programmes which not only helps them earn but boosts their physical as well as mental health to have positive outlook towards world can be a fruitful step.in this way, they will have confidence and motivation build up in them which automatically takes them farther away from falling back into same pothole.
In conclusion, offenders even after serving time are seen with distrust and treated as outcast which demoralises them and further allure them to commit more crimes. It can be avoided by helping them feel belonged or at the very least support them and treat them as humans.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: there's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, so, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in general, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1689.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02678571429 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74782013944 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627976190476 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.084169097 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.642857143 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92857142857 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215179947544 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074096635478 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494967202826 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147596297399 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0615109535248 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.