Some people say that talent is the most important factor for being an expert in a field while others say that motivation is the key to that. If you want to become an expert in a certain field, do you need to have more talent or more motivation?
Motivation is necessary to grow in life. Handful of people assume that talent is the most crucial factor for being an expert in a field, however opponents presume that motivation is is important. I, personally, agree with the latter side as motivated people can work upto their full potential and they do not decide things on pretext of whim.
To begin with latter view, inspired individuals perform tasks with fullest potential. Since they work in accordance with their interests, they tend to give their best performance. To exemplify, Sachin Tendulkar's coach motivated him to break his own previous records in batting. In addition to this, motivated people do not decide things on a whim. They have certain motives in their lives so they work hard to achieve them. Resultantly, they can encourage other individuals as well as become role models. So why not more motivation is needed to become a pro, if inspired masses are not drived by sudden mind changes?
Now discussing former view, talent is eternal. Since factions possess talent right from their childhood, they get life long benefits from it. To illustrate, a musician who is good at playing instruments can earn a lot of fame. Moreover, flair can be a source of income. Folks can get a good salary job as they can utilise their talent meticulously. Eventually, talented people will excel in any sphere of life.
To recapitulate, motivation helps individuals to choose right path. Although talent can be an income generation source yet inspiration is important to achieve goals.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2023-05-20 | rajwinder.12 | 61 | view |
- Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar which causes many health problems Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar Do you agree or disagree 84
- Some people say that talent is the most important factor for being an expert in a field while others say that motivation is the key to that If you want to become an expert in a certain field do you need to have more talent or more motivation 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 180, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: is
...wever opponents presume that motivation is is important. I, personally, agree with th...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 63, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the fullest'.
Suggestion: with the fullest
...iew, inspired individuals perform tasks with fullest potential. Since they work in accordanc...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 57, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to right'
Suggestion: to right
... motivation helps individuals to choose right path. Although talent can be an income ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, well, in addition, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1294.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07450980392 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73740097369 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611764705882 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.1019358715 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.8888888889 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1666666667 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.94444444444 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254923026871 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07828637585 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0811154688238 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164400691836 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0790412052284 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.53 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.