Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
When people say that music really bring them together close to each other apart from being different in culture , age and sometimes language I agree with them immediately . music is not just something that you hear with your ears , its something that feel deep down in your soul , moves all your senses disconnect you from this world problems and fly you to another planet were you can find only people who shares the same music taste as you . when you go to any music concerts you will find all kinds of different people there different in looks , culture and ages , different in a lot of things but their music taste , traveling from around the world just to share this moment with these random supporters . sometimes it uint them like there were related to each other . the only dark side of this loyalty is that sometimes people tend to care alittl bit more that the usual , start to attacking who don’t like what they like and force them in to it . what you like about music is that can tell you about other people souls , souls that you may never find around you , a close friends sitting with each other sharing a childhood song and bring back old memories or sitting under the moon light with your lovd ones both listinnig to first song that you danced to , the song that connected you to your soul mate forever.
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- Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, may, really, so, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1071.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51898734177 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.05601131799 2.80592935109 73% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540084388186 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.2975951904 192% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.6079959464 49.4020404114 194% => OK
Chars per sentence: 178.5 106.682146367 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.5 20.7667163134 190% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330810298934 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167745818097 0.084324248473 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102326288919 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.330810298934 0.151304729494 219% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.6 13.0946893788 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.1 11.3001002004 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.53 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 78.4519038076 32% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 9.78957915832 179% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.1190380762 174% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.