To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
When we think of a country, the first thing that comes to our mind is one of it's major city. Be it Mumbai when it comes to India, New York City for USA and Tokyo in case of Japan. We can usually find a wide variety of people living together and doing different kinds of work in major cities. Therefore, in order to understand the most important characteristics of a society, studying its major cities is very important.
Major cities reveal the dynamics between various sections of the society. Consider the case of Mumbai. One one place there is the infamous Dharavi slum, where thousands of people are living in dearth conditions doing menial jobs. On the other hand, Mumbai is also the adobe of some of the India's richest people, living in sky-high sea-facing apartments. However, when it comes to celebrating festivals, such as Holi, we see different groups of people forgetting their differences and celebrating together. The dynamics between these two extreme groups of people can only be found in a city like Mumbai. Therefore by studying Mumbai, one of the major cities of India, one can know so many things about the Indian society, especially the different living conditions and occupations of people, and how they all live together co-operating with each other.
Moreover, A major city is also a cultural melting pot. New York City, where one can find a culmination of different cultures across the world, says so much about America's immigrant friendly attitude and how they have welcomed and accepted different cultures to be thier own. By understanding New York City , one can learn so much about how the different groups of immigrants from different countries, be it Korean, Chinese or Indians have shaped the American culture. To understand the most important characteristics of American society, studying New York City is essential.
However, inorder to get a complete picture of a society, one cannot ignore lesser known cities or villeges. By studying the villeges, one can learn a lot about history of a society, such as certain traditions which could only be found in villeges and would have disappeared in major cities. Therefore only studying major society wouldn't paint a complete picture. But, without studying major cities, one would miss a lot of important aspects. Therefore anyone willing to understand the most important characteristics of a society should study a wide variety of cities and villeges, but they cannot ignore the major cities.
In conclusion, studying major cities of a society is essential to understand its most important characteristics. The major cities, being a melting pot of culture and a place where a variety of people live doing a diverse set of jobs, reveal a great deal of information about the society. However, just studying the major cities isn't enough to get a complete picture of society. But it is a must if one is to understand the most important characteristics.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 58.6224719101 118% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2452.0 2235.4752809 110% => OK
No of words: 487.0 442.535393258 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03490759754 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69766713281 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82406491601 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.431211498973 0.4932671777 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 782.1 704.065955056 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.137139136 60.3974514979 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.166666667 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2916666667 23.4991977007 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.04166666667 5.21951772744 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.467632275762 0.243740707755 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166120087928 0.0831039109588 200% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.165895744931 0.0758088955206 219% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.306335007786 0.150359130593 204% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123636627263 0.0667264976115 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 100.480337079 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.