Same people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading use to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no pay attention to it
In this expeditiously evolving world number of people think that advertising is important for business. so I amagreement that. businessmen should be pay more for expeditiously. Furthermore It is seen bring the effective for them business.
Many doctors want to see a law banning all tobacco advertising.As marketing manager, his job is to oversee all the company’s advertising.So otherside important occupation workers sympathizer advertise, moreover nowadays much people earn money from the ones. Internet marketing is developing day by day, it is easier side for make money, furthermore regarding marketing is comfortable, easy and reduce of time
I am in broad agreement with these. On the other hand, advertisement might be lose its power, because peopleexposed commercials consistly and this caused ignoring any kind of sale tactics. For instance, if people see many commercials in an online streaming platform, they cancel their memberships because they find the commercial sirritating. This shows that maybe, marketing skills must be changed.
In conclusion, advertisement might divide the society whether it is related to the today's world. In my opinion, its success outweigh the people's attention to it. People might decide with their experiences.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 5.60731707317 392% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1092.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.74736842105 4.92477711251 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.54419661417 2.65546596893 133% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 106.607317073 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.705263157895 0.547539520022 129% => OK
syllable_count: 331.2 283.868780488 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 71.3306814471 43.030603864 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2727272727 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2727272727 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6363636364 5.23603664747 203% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173930763388 0.215688989381 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0681118113719 0.103423049105 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528327200427 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106980987011 0.15604864568 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545950762676 0.0819641961636 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.2329268293 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.77 11.4140731707 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.06136585366 121% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 40.7170731707 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.