Some people think that high salary is important when choosing a company to work for, while others think that good working atmosphere is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
People are mostly conflicted while making a choice for a workplace, to either choose a which pays a higher salary or thenone which has a healthy supportive workplace envirnoment. In both these factors play a major role ina persons motivation to work and job satisfaction, making it a much harder choice.
A higher paying job helps people with a greater job satisfaction, as they have enough to pay for their needs and desires , raising above the nasic physiological needs. Having a competitive salary helps generate motivation and leads to a better work output as people tend to work through the hardships in the workplace with the motivation of a better lifestyle. Moreover, having enough money in savings provides people a sense of security and achievement, which not only helps them peak socially but also psychologically. This can easily be exemplified through the tendency of people lining up for tech jobs with competitive salary, and what Elon Musk’s Tesla has been known for.
In contrary to popular belief, a higher paying job is not the only factor that shapes people’s motivation to work, but a better working envirnoment is. A healthier working envirnoment helps people with psychological support and better motivation to work, as the person doesn’t dreads every moment they spend at work but actually finds it enjoyable. Moreover, this helps people to learn and grow, unafraid of failure due to the safety net of an understanding workplace. A healthy workplace not only helps in motivation but with job satisfaction, as the person can find happiness in the work they do rather than making the money they earn as the only motivator.This has also been a mojor concern for companies like Google , Apple where they provide multiple perks and preivilages for maintaining a healthy work culture.
To sum up, a choice for workplace either with a competitive salary or a better work culture is a matter of people’s aspirations in life, and depends completely on what people desires. Some people like to have a financial security and believe work is something that has to be done, for whom a competitive salary is a better option while some keep theri mental health ahead of financial security and would love a healthy work environment. If i wrre to choose, i would probably choose a better work environment as I too like to enjoy minor details of life and would rather like to wake up and look forward ro going to work, but with that being said a healthy environment with a higher salary would do no harm.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: ,
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Suggestion: dread
...tivation to work, as the person doesn’t dreads every moment they spend at work but act...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, look, moreover, so, then, while, as to, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2101.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 425.0 315.596192385 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94352941176 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84865903639 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.482352941176 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 662.4 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.0291423258 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.615384615 106.682146367 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.6923076923 20.7667163134 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69230769231 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209599012912 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0903573180982 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441450020497 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14239397734 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0286070883672 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.0946893788 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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