The graph below shows female unemployment rates in each country of the United Kingdom in 2013 and 2014.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the percentage of jobless women in 4 different countries n Britian in two consuctive year 2013 and 2014.
Overall, it is readily apparent that England, Wales and Northern Ireland has successfully decrease the unemployment rate among woman, while the figure for Scotland showed an upward trend. Moreover, it also noted that the unemployment rates of English women and Scottish woman were remarkable higher than those in Wales and Northern Island.
In 2013. the proportion of unemployment in England stood at 6.8% followd by Scotland at 6.1%. The figures in Wales and Northern Ireland were relatively similar, respectively 5.6% and 5.4%.
A year later, the unemployment rate of woman in Scotland experienced a slight increase to 6.7%, making it the highest figure in the year 2014. In contrast, its counterparts, Wales and England follow an similar downard pattern to 5% for the former and 6.5% for the latter. Similarly, the figure in Northern Wales also wtnessed an dramatic drop to 4.8%, making it being the lowest point in 2014.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 91, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'decreased'.
Suggestion: decreased
...s and Northern Ireland has successfully decrease the unemployment rate among woman, whil...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
... Wales and Northern Island. In 2013. the proportion of unemployment in England s...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... counterparts, Wales and England follow an similar downard pattern to 5% for the f...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... figure in Northern Wales also wtnessed an dramatic drop to 4.8%, making it being ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, similarly, so, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 896.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20930232558 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78198737574 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587209302326 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7014894816 43.030603864 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 5.23603664747 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130023891042 0.215688989381 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663046165953 0.103423049105 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048718406274 0.0843802449381 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0816156525189 0.15604864568 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0175747476571 0.0819641961636 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.