What make person success
People want to have success in life, so they work very hard to achieve their goals. Numerous researches have been done to find the key to success of famous people. There are 3 primary causes to success: a clear goal, strong determination, and detailed plan
The first driver of success is a clear goal. People who have a clear goal tend to achieving theirs dreams. When indiviuals have a goal, individuals can define what they need to do. As a result, it leads to personal success. A research of a America university showed that only 3% of students in that univerisity have clear goals, and all of 3% students gained achievements after they had graduated. Clear goals brings many benefits. People can save a lot of time and efforts. Moreover, it is easy for people to make plan base on goals.In order to have a clear goal, we should identify the biggest desire.In brief, clear goals are one of the factors that results in success.Everyone should have their own goals.
The second reason is strong determination.Strong determination is extremely important because it has huge impact on success. When one have strong determination, they can overcome the difficulties and tackles plenty of problems. Napoleon Hills-writer of one of the most well-known financial book” Think rich, grow rich” claimed that strong determination is vital to success. He believed that without strong determination people can’t gain properity or success.Determination brings us 2 values. The first advangtage is that determination gives us the magical inner power to deal with difficulties. The second advantage is that it help us to focus on our goals. In order to have a strong determination, people should pay attention to their goals. Overall, it is necessary to have strong determination in life.
Detailed plan is the final factor contribute to success. A detailed plan is a plan with clear goal, time, and to-do list. People who have detailed plan can follow their plans step by step to achieve their dreams. Detailed plan give clear vision for human. In addition, detailed plan helps people to have well-preparation for the coming deadlines. It is important to have a clear goal and deadlines to make detailed plans.
In conclusion, great success is attribute to a clear goal,strong determination, and detailed plan.People should study how to be successful by reading books, and gaining more knowledge. The authorities should popularize imformation about great success
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, second, so, well, in addition, in brief, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2063.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 400.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1575 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12329053244 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.4975 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 619.2 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.0665219518 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.3461538462 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3846153846 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57692307692 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 25.0 8.67935871743 288% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170608864331 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0554306279169 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733072440777 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106789438244 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442397722446 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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