It is more important to work at a job that you enjoy, even if the salary is low Than it is to have a high-paying job that you do not enjoy.
The debate raised if the statement is of money v/s passion. Is it better to work at a high-paying job that we don't like or a job with little monetary rewards and work that we enjoy? In my opinion, it would be beneficial to choose passion and our own inclination in a field over money. I feel this way for several reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
To start with, I am the kind of person who needs a reason to wake up every morning. If I am doing something, I need to know that it is going to have some impact. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. During my bachelor's, I had a chance to work with a prestigious multinational bank as an analyst. At the same time, I had an opportunity to work at an initial-scale startup. Knowing from my seniors that the MNC in which I was offered a job has a slow work culture, and monotonous work in most of the departments, I chose to work with a startup despite the low stipends there comparatively. It was one of the most difficult yet fantastic decisions that I have taken for my career because I got so strong technically within that short period of time.
Secondly, it brings mental peace to me knowing that the work I am doing is going to affect the lives of so many people. I believe that working at a job that we really enjoy would surely improve our outlook on the world. It will help to be happy most of the time which can lead to better health. Besides, low income should not bother them much, especially those who are in the initial stage of their career. A person can always learn and switch to high-paying jobs later in his or her career. The important thing is to have skills. Therefore, I am of the opinion that mastering new skills is what everyone should focus on.
Some may argue that money is extremely important to survive in today's competitive world. Undoubtedly, money is of the essence when it comes to living a comfortable life. However, this does not justify choosing financial gains over intellectual growth and personal satisfaction. One does not need to look far to realize that having a job that he or she enjoys working every day is much better than going to a boring job that feels forceful to the mind. Over time, it is possible that our interests change or develop even more deeply, and switching to a high-paying job would be easy than when we have the required skills and experience.
In conclusion, it is undeniably true that going for a job that we enjoy and getting to learn exciting new things every day is much better than a boring job with mundane tasks. That would be the best thing to do keeping our mental health a priority.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 111, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...er to work at a high-paying job that we dont like or a job with little monetary rewa...
^^^^
Line 3, column 751, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...so strong technically within that short period of time. Secondly, it brings mental peace t...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 10, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'argues'.
Suggestion: argues
...t everyone should focus on. Some may argue that money is extremely important to su...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 94, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to excite'.
Suggestion: to excite
... job that we enjoy and getting to learn exciting new things every day is much better tha...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, look, may, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, i feel, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 25.0 11.0286738351 227% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 66.0 43.0788530466 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2169.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 488.0 407.700716846 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44467213115 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70007681154 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60195796777 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506147540984 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 679.5 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2009999884 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.76 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.52 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318450416515 0.236089414692 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0756258921636 0.076458572812 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.08886439604 0.0737576698707 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184919794142 0.150856017488 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422066254276 0.0645574589148 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 111, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...er to work at a high-paying job that we dont like or a job with little monetary rewa...
^^^^
Line 3, column 751, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...so strong technically within that short period of time. Secondly, it brings mental peace t...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 10, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'argues'.
Suggestion: argues
...t everyone should focus on. Some may argue that money is extremely important to su...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 94, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to excite'.
Suggestion: to excite
... job that we enjoy and getting to learn exciting new things every day is much better tha...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, look, may, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, i feel, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 25.0 11.0286738351 227% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 66.0 43.0788530466 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2169.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 488.0 407.700716846 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44467213115 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70007681154 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60195796777 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506147540984 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 679.5 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2009999884 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.76 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.52 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318450416515 0.236089414692 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0756258921636 0.076458572812 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.08886439604 0.0737576698707 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184919794142 0.150856017488 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422066254276 0.0645574589148 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.