In many countries, the number of animals and plants is declining. Why do you think it is happening? How to solve this issue?
The dwindling numbers of animals and plants in many countries is a major concern for the environment. This essay will discuss the reasons behind this phenomenon and suggest potential solutions to tackle this issue.
There are several reasons why animals and plants are facing extinction. Firstly, habitat destruction is a crucial factor leading to the decline of flora and fauna. Human activities, such as deforestation, expansion of urban areas, overgrazing, and mining, have led to the loss of natural habitats. Secondly, climate change-induced changes in temperature and weather patterns pose a severe threat to various species. The rising temperature makes it challenging for some animals to adapt and tolerate, leading to their extinction. Moreover, poaching and illegal hunting have contributed to the loss of key species that play an essential role in maintaining ecological balance.
To address the issue of declining numbers of animals and plants, governments need to take proactive measures. One solution can be establishing national parks and wildlife reserves, which serve as sanctuaries for endangered species. These protected areas should be managed properly so that they can serve as safe havens for endangered species. For instance, many African countries have created national parks to protect elephants, lions, and other animals facing extinction. Additionally, governments should enforce stricter laws against poaching and illegal hunting activities. Finally, individuals should participate by reducing carbon emissions through public transport use, recycling, and decreasing meat consumption.
In conclusion, the decline in animal and plant populations is a serious problem that requires urgent attention. Governments, organizations, and individuals must come together to find sustainable solutions to halt and reverse the trend.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1593.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.94402985075 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0578147623 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64552238806 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 18.0692029085 49.4020404114 37% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.5625 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204540063095 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066183890723 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0826202607152 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126890708795 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.067395398689 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.88 12.4159519038 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.5 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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