Write a letter to an English teacher whom you know and ask to borrow some English books to help a child of your friend to study you write Due details of the child Do you plan to teach him or her Which books do you want to borrow

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Write a letter to an English teacher whom you know and ask to borrow some English books to help a child of your friend to study. you write:
. Due details of the child?
. Do you plan to teach him or her?
. Which books do you want to borrow?

Submitted by TLan168 on Mon, 07/03/2023 - 05:15

Dear Kim,

I am one of the students in your class. I cordially want to borrow some English books because I am going to teach a child of one of my closest friend. my friend has some financial problem and that’s why he is unable to buy new books for his child. so, I decided to help my friend.

My friend’s house is near to my locality. the child is very intelligent and hardworking and I told him to come to my home for studies. I will teach him after his school hours and he will come at 6’o clock in the evening.

The child is good in all subjects besides English. so, I want to help him in this subject. by doing this, I will not only help my friend but participate in the future development of the child also. so, it would be a great help if you lend me these books. I will return you these books as soon as possible.

I thank you in advance and hope you will definitely help me in making the future of the child.

Yours sincerely,

Michael

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 152, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...ch a child of one of my closest friend. my friend has some financial problem and t...
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Line 3, column 249, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
... unable to buy new books for his child. so, I decided to help my friend. My fri...
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Line 5, column 43, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
... friend’s house is near to my locality. the child is very intelligent and hardworki...
^^^
Line 7, column 52, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...s good in all subjects besides English. so, I want to help him in this subject. by...
^^
Line 7, column 92, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: By
...so, I want to help him in this subject. by doing this, I will not only help my fri...
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Line 7, column 193, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
... in the future development of the child also. so, it would be a great help if you le...
^^^^
Line 7, column 199, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...e future development of the child also. so, it would be a great help if you lend m...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 5.60731707317 678% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 784.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.21505376344 4.92477711251 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31979123616 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55376344086 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 231.3 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 1.53170731707 783% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.2763332207 43.030603864 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 56.0 112.824112599 50% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.2857142857 22.9334400587 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.85714285714 5.23603664747 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 3.70975609756 297% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327639931795 0.215688989381 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108549692645 0.103423049105 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725925901071 0.0843802449381 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199127796057 0.15604864568 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0788346369404 0.0819641961636 96% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.1 13.2329268293 39% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 92.12 61.2550243902 150% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.6 10.3012195122 35% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.31 11.4140731707 55% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.32 8.06136585366 78% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 40.7170731707 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 152, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...ch a child of one of my closest friend. my friend has some financial problem and t...
^^
Line 3, column 249, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
... unable to buy new books for his child. so, I decided to help my friend. My fri...
^^
Line 5, column 43, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
... friend’s house is near to my locality. the child is very intelligent and hardworki...
^^^
Line 7, column 52, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...s good in all subjects besides English. so, I want to help him in this subject. by...
^^
Line 7, column 92, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: By
...so, I want to help him in this subject. by doing this, I will not only help my fri...
^^
Line 7, column 193, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
... in the future development of the child also. so, it would be a great help if you le...
^^^^
Line 7, column 199, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...e future development of the child also. so, it would be a great help if you lend m...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 5.60731707317 678% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 784.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.21505376344 4.92477711251 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31979123616 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55376344086 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 231.3 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 1.53170731707 783% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.2763332207 43.030603864 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 56.0 112.824112599 50% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.2857142857 22.9334400587 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.85714285714 5.23603664747 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 3.70975609756 297% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327639931795 0.215688989381 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108549692645 0.103423049105 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725925901071 0.0843802449381 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199127796057 0.15604864568 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0788346369404 0.0819641961636 96% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.1 13.2329268293 39% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 92.12 61.2550243902 150% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.6 10.3012195122 35% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.31 11.4140731707 55% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.32 8.06136585366 78% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 40.7170731707 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.