Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, people spend a enormous time on their workplace. The job they engaged in largely decides their life satisfaction. Some people believe that various tasks could bring employees more happiness than just having the repeated works everyday. From where I stand, I do concur with this opinion that different types tasks could stimulate people's positive feelings.
To begin with, workers could catch fewer dullness when approach different tasks. This is because people are exposed to an environment that is full of changes and oppotunities, which require them to make effort to resolve all kinds of problems. In this cases, employees need to lean more new skills and step out of their boundaries. In this process, not only could they make a encourageous and exciting movement but also eliminate the sense of boring. My personal experience provides a compelling example. Last year, I had a intern in a technology company. At first, I was just assigned some simple tasks, such as printing, making meeting notes. I felt much borederm among those easy and repeated tasks, which make me arouse the negevtive emotions and self-doubting. However, after a week, the manager allowed me to put up with ideas in the meeting and participated a project. After that, my personal statement changed from disappointed to satisfied to my job as I could have more oppotunities to show my ability and try to resolve problems. Even though I still needed to do the simple jobs, the additional tasks offset the dullness and let me gain more satisfaction.
Moreover, varied tasks exerices wokers personal abilities which can help them to get promoted quickly. Workers could build up all kinds of abilities, such as cimmunication skill, strong reasoning, time management, by involving in different types of work. Those abilities are the foundation for the future developement, which can faster the career promotion. In fact, higher position means sound salary and better socail status--the origin of life happiness. For example, my sister used to be a small staff in a company. She was not satisfied just doing the same work over and over again, so she volunterily to take part in different peojects and took the responsibilities. Because her diligent and ambitious, she quickly commanded different skills and established a good relationship with her mates. After that, my sister got promoted from a baisc worker to the group leader that enjoys more power and salary. Ulike a working machine, she dared to try varying works and the skills she developed in the process is not only the result of her dilligent but also is the key to future developement.
In conclusion, I still believe that doing different types of work makes people more satisfied than repeating the same tasks all day long.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 24, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
Nowadays, people spend a enormous time on their workplace. The j...
^
Line 1, column 237, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ess than just having the repeated works everyday. From where I stand, I do concur with t...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 248, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...rt to resolve all kinds of problems. In this cases, employees need to lean more new ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 375, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... this process, not only could they make a encourageous and exciting movement but ...
^
Line 3, column 523, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... a compelling example. Last year, I had a intern in a technology company. At firs...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, still, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2322.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 455.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1032967033 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61852021839 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79100111713 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 252.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553846153846 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 720.0 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8887168899 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.88 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44 5.45110844103 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217470589007 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535695115721 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0679795305495 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170920183294 0.150856017488 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0779283204844 0.0645574589148 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 86.8835125448 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 24, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
Nowadays, people spend a enormous time on their workplace. The j...
^
Line 1, column 237, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ess than just having the repeated works everyday. From where I stand, I do concur with t...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 248, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...rt to resolve all kinds of problems. In this cases, employees need to lean more new ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 375, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... this process, not only could they make a encourageous and exciting movement but ...
^
Line 3, column 523, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... a compelling example. Last year, I had a intern in a technology company. At firs...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, still, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2322.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 455.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1032967033 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61852021839 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79100111713 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 252.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553846153846 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 720.0 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8887168899 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.88 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44 5.45110844103 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217470589007 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535695115721 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0679795305495 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170920183294 0.150856017488 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0779283204844 0.0645574589148 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 86.8835125448 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.