When choosing a job, salary is the most important consideration. To what extent do you agree or disagree
People have various considerations when choosing a job. Some people are of the opinion that money should be the most important factor to look out for while searching for a job. In this essay, I will give reasons and explanation why I completely disagree with this view.
Generally, the main reason people work is to earn enough money to take care of themselves and their family, thus, it seems natural that the take home is the most important factor to look out for In choosing an occupation. A community research in Nigeria found out that 60% of unemployed graduates are insisting on high-income jobs rather than low-paying jobs regardless of the incentives that may be involved. This is done out of the need to make enough money to manage their expenses.
While it is good to factor in wages when choosing an occupation, I believe it is not the most important thing to consider. Other important factors to consider include working hours, distance of workplace from home and interest in the type of job. Considering all these will lead to a more satisfying work-life balance. A situation where one earn much but is usually stressed as a result of long working hours will no doubt affect the individual and his family negatively. Hence, the need to check these important factors before considering any job.
To sum up, despite the fact that it is good to consider salary before taking up a job, I strongly believe there are more important factors to be considered before taking such decisions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'community research'.
Suggestion: Community research
...look out for In choosing an occupation. A community research in Nigeria found out that 60% of unempl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, look, may, so, thus, while, no doubt, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1240.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82490272374 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68362912524 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556420233463 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9871307292 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.333333333 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4166666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218064669053 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0891550266886 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0837104888099 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135015016572 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524126752408 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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